Saturday, February 16, 2013

Sentence fragments:

New Topic: All about sentence fragments:


Sentences are like the infrastructures basic to a city’s needs. When sentences are not in good working order, communication may grind to a halt.
A sentence fragment is a group of words that is punctuated like a sentence, but does not express a complete thought. To correct a fragment, you can add information to complete the thought or combine the fragment with a nearby sentence.

Problem 1:      A fragment that lacks a subject
Error:               Students tried out for different roles. Wanted to play the part of Scrooge or one of the ghosts.
Revision:         Students tried out for different roles. Many wanted to play the part of Scrooge or one of the ghosts. (Add a subject to make the fragment a complete sentence.)
Revision:         Students tried out for different roles, such as the part of Scrooge or one of the ghosts. (Combine the fragment with a sentence.)

Problem 2:      A fragment that lacks a verb.
Error:               Several of my friends chose to be on the tech crew. The group in charge of scenery, lighting and props.
Revision:         Several of my friends chose to be on the tech crew.
The group is in charge of scenery, lighting, and props.
(Make the fragment a sentence by adding a verb.)

Or

Revision:         Several of my friends chose to be on the tech crew, the group in charge of scenery, lighting, and props.
                        (Combine the fragment with a sentence.)
Error:               Auditions began after school. Students sitting eagerly in the auditorium.
Revision:         auditions began after school. Students were sitting eagerly in the auditorium.
                        (Add a verb to the fragment.)

Problem 3:      A fragment that is a subordinate clause
Error:               After everyone had read a passage. Our director announced his casting decisions.
Revision:         After everyone had read a passage, our director announced his casting decisions.
                        (Combine the fragment with another sentence.)
                       
Or       

Revision:         Everyone read a passage. Our director then announced his casting decisions.
                        (Rewrite the fragment as a sentence.)

Problem 4:      A fragment that lacks both a subject and verb
Error:               Our schedule is going to be hectic. With only three weeks of rehearsals before the first performance.
Revision:         With only three weeks of rehearsals before the first performance, our schedule is going to be hectic.
                        (Combine the fragment with a sentence.)

Sunday, January 20, 2013

Notes about Active and Passive Voice, and Verbals




Active and Passive Voice:
The voice is the quality of a verb which shows whether the subject is the doer or the receiver or the action.

If the subject of a sentence does something, the verb is in the active voice. If the subject of a sentence receives the action, the verb is in the passive voice. The passive voice is used to show that the action is more important than the doer.

Example          Active:             The maid does the housework.
                        Passive:          The housework is done by the maid.

The passive voice is used when the doer of the action is not known or uncertain. The doer or agent is left out of the sentence.

Example:         Active:             Someone stole Melvin’s wallet.
                        Passive:          Melvin’s wallet was stolen.

1.    The simple present tense of the verb is in the active voice is formed using the base form of the verb that agrees with the subject.
Ex:       They sweep the park every morning.
           
The present tense of the verb in the passive voice is formed using the be verbs (am, is, and are) + the past participle form of the verb
            Ex:       The park is swept every morning.

2.    The present continuous tense of the verb in the active voice is formed using the be verbs (am, is and are) + the verb ending in –ing.
Ex:       May is looking after my younger brother.

The present continuous tense of the verb in the passive voice is formed using the be verbs (am, is, and are) + being + the past participle form of the verb.
            Ex:       My younger brother is being looked after by May.
           
3.    The simple past tense of the verb in the active voice is formed using the regular or the irregular form of the past tense of the verb.
Ex:       The principal praised the pupil.

The simple past tense of the verb in the passive voice is formed using the be verbs (was and were) + the past participle form of the verb.
            Ex:       The pupil was praised by the principal.

4.    The past continuous tense of the verb in the active voice is formed using the be verbs (was and were) + the verb ending in –ing.
Ex:       Jack was bullying tom.

The past continuous tense of the verb in the passive voice is formed using the be verbs (was and were) + being + the past participle form of the verb.
            Ex:       Tom was being bullied by Jack.

5.    The simple future tense of the verb in the active voice is formed using will or shall + the base form of the verb.
Ex:       Mr. Juan will serve the guests himself.

The future tense of the verb in the passive voice is formed using will or shall + be + the past participle form of the verb.
                        Ex:       The guests will be served by Mr. Juan himself.

6.    The present perfect tense of the verb in the active voice is formed using has or have + the past participle form of the verb.
Ex:       Someone has opened the safe.

The present perfect tense of the verb in the passive voice is formed using has or have + been + the past participle form of the verb.
            Ex:       The safe has been opened.

7.    The past perfect tense of the verb in the active voice is formed using had + the past participle form of the verb.
Ex:       They had burglarized the house twice.

The past perfect tense of the verb in the passive voice is formed using had + been + the past participle form of the verb.
            Ex:       The house had been burglarized twice.


Verbals:
Verbals are based on verbs. However, the y do not function as a verb but as a noun, adjective, or adverb. There are three types of verbals – gerund, participle, and infinitive.

Gerunds differ from verbs in the present continuous form because gerunds are present participles used as nouns. They always end in ing.
            Read – reading           jog – jogging
A gerund can be the subject or the object of a sentence.
            Reading increases our knowledge. (Reading is the subject of the sentence.)
            I enjoy jogging around the park. (Jogging is the object of the sentence.)

Participle is a type of verbal used as an adjective. It ends in ing, ed, or en.
            The surrounding area is covered with tall grass.
            The overloaded bus couldn’t run fast.
            I cannot walk with my swollen legs.

Infinitive is a type of verbal used as a noun, an adjective, or an adverb. It consists of to + verb in its base form.
            To swim in the Olympics is my dream. (infinitive as a noun)
            She trains hard to win. (infinitive as adverb)
            The teacher has many test papers to check. (infinitive as adjective)
            She checks the test papers regularly to know if her students learn. (infinitive as adverb)

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Saturday, November 24, 2012

Grade 6 Long Test Coverage

Grade 6 students, here are the lessons covered by the long test:
  • The Young Jose Rizal
  • Determining the Author's Purpose
  • Using Figurative Language
  • Identifying and Using Prepositions
  • Identifying Functions of the Prepositional Phrases
  • A New Me
  • Predicting Outcomes
  • The Hand that Serve
  • Identifying Sentences According to Function
  • Identifying the Basic Parts of a Sentence 
Good Luck!

Monday, October 1, 2012

Topics for today:


Structure of dialogs and mode of delivery in Afro-Asian drama:
The specifics of theatrical dialogue are governed by the essential features of the theatrical environment. These are perhaps best explored by considering other media in which dialogue plays a part, such as film, literature and radio:

·         Film is probably the most realistic of all creative media insofar as it engulfs viewers' minds with sights and sounds. Dialogue is not necessarily important, since film's power to communicate lies largely in the richness of its visual imagery and non-verbal soundscapes.
  • Nor is dialogue necessarily important in literature. Novelists and storytellers can easily get their message across through reported speech, or even exclusively through descriptive text. Where dialogue occurs, it usually depends heavily on the context of descriptive text, so that the reader may understand who is speaking and may know enough about the character to be able to create a reasonably satisfying mental picture of the situation.
  • Dialogue is crucial in radio, however. The absence of the visual dimension may be partly compensated by imaginative, suggestive use of sound and, to a lesser extent, a narrator. Only the dialogue can provide any further information needed to complete the visual picture in listeners' minds. Accordingly, radio dialogue must be cleverly designed to impart information that fills the gap of the missing visual dimension.
Of these examples, only radio dialogue comes close to theatrical dialogue in terms of its nature and importance.
Theatre audiences obviously have the benefit of the visual dimension that radio listeners lack, so that theatre playwrights do not need to put the same visual slant on their writing as do radio playwrights. Having said that, the visual power of theatre is not nearly as intense as that of the film. Whereas the film director can fill the screen with a meaningful flicker of an eyelid, the theatre director must rely to a far greater extent on the writer and the actors to ensure that subtle imagery communicates itself all the way to the back of the upper balcony. Dialogue that might readily be cut from a screenplay, where the camera says it all, may come into its own in the theatre, where words are a crucial factor in the process of communication.
In short, whereas most writers in fields other than theatre can "get by" with lacklustre dialogue-writing skills, writers for theatre (and radio) simply cannot. 


Variety of character portrayal:
Characterizations in play encompass four separate processes:
1.    Conception – this where the character is born out of the playwright’s mind. It is from the moment where the play is formed as an idea, and then when it is being written down. The character will depend on the plot, structure, or theme that will ultimately become drama.

Characters may develop or change radically in the process of conception, and nothing in this process is really complete or final until the other three processes are also complete.

2.    Presentation – the way the character deliver his/her line through the words and actions specified in the text or script.

The artistic decision about how much to present and when to present it can have an important effect on how the audience responds to a character and what sort of character ultimately is realized in the play. But the full effect of characterization in a play comes out when the play is fleshed out on the stage with a live-actor playing the part.

3.    Casting – it is the process of deciding what actors are to play the parts – usually, a director takes a major step in determining how a character will seem to be to the audience. Choosing an actor is determined not only of the physical appearance, voice quality, and stage presence but also more subtle details of presentation. The acting talent of each individual actor, the quality of intelligence and understanding of the role that the actor is capable of shall determine how a character will ultimately seem to an audience.

4.    Acting – the last step in characterization. It is in the actual production that the actor makes something distinctive of his or her talents in relation to the author’s original conception.

Local color or regionalism:
It refers to any fictional prose or poetry that shows or focuses on the characters, dialects, customs, topography, and other features that is unique or particular to a specific region. Sometimes, it requires a setting outside the world of modern development, a zone of backwardness where locally variant folkways still prevail. Its characters are ethnologically colorful, personifications of the different humanity produced in such non-modern cultural settings. Above all, this fiction features an extensive written simulation of regional vernacular, a conspicuous effort to catch the nuances of local speech.

The usual content of a literature showing regionalism:
Setting: The emphasis is frequently on nature and the limitations it imposes; settings are frequently remote and inaccessible. The setting is integral to the story and may sometimes become a character in itself.

Characters: Local color stories tend to be concerned with the character of the district or region rather than with the individual: characters may become character types, sometimes quaint or stereotypical. The characters are marked by their adherence to the old ways, by dialect, and by particular personality traits central to the region. In women's local color fiction, the heroines are often unmarried women or young girls.

Narrator: The narrator is typically an educated observer from the world beyond who learns something from the characters while preserving a sometimes sympathetic, sometimes ironic distance from them. The narrator serves as mediator between the rural folk of the tale and the urban audience to whom the tale is directed.

Plots: It has been said that "nothing happens" in local color stories by women authors, and often very little does happen. Stories may include lots of storytelling and revolve around the community and its rituals.

Themes: Many local color stories share an antipathy to change and a certain degree of nostalgia for an always-past golden age. A celebration of community and acceptance in the face of adversity characterizes women's local color fiction. Thematic tension or conflict between urban ways and old-fashioned rural values is often symbolized by the intrusion of an outsider or interloper who seeks something from the community.

Phrases and Clauses:
Phrases and clauses are group of related words that serve as the building blocks of sentences on a larger scale than parts of speech. A clause contains both a subject and a verb whereas a phrase does not.

Understanding phrases and clauses and knowing how to organize them help writers create varied sentences and avoid problems such as run-on sentences, fragments, and punctuation errors.

Grammar:
Phrases and Clauses:
Phrases and clauses are group of related words that serve as the building blocks of sentences on a larger scale than parts of speech. A clause contains both a subject and a verb whereas a phrase does not.

Understanding phrases and clauses and knowing how to organize them help writers create varied sentences and avoid problems such as run-on sentences, fragments, and punctuation errors.

HOW CAN WE IDENTIFY PHRASES AND CLAUSES?
A phrase, which generally consists of multiple parts of speech, behaves as a unit like a single part of speech.  In the following examples, note how phrases take on the roles of nouns, verbs, adjectives, and adverbs.  (Phrases that begin with a preposition—called “prepositional phrases”—can fulfill various functions, particularly as adjective phrases, adverb phrases, or part of noun phrases.)

• Noun phrases name a person, place, thing, or idea.
Buying a home can be a stressful ordeal.
My elegant Aunt Ida adores that mangy one-eyed mutt of hers.

• Verb phrases express action or state of being.
We may have been mistaken about the car’s reliability.
The Sampson twins will be traveling in Belize all next month.

• Adjective phrases describe nouns.
The bird, a beautiful yellow grosbeak, is chirping gleefully.
The tree on your left is a popular haven for such species.

• Adverb phrases describe verbs, adjectives, other adverbs, or even whole sentences.
Because of the recent rainfall, our vegetable garden is thriving.
I wish all people could live with music in their hearts.

·   Prepositional phrases consist of a preposition and a noun or pronoun that serves as the object of the preposition.

In the canteen             At the school
            From the governor      Around the corner       Under the table

·   Infinitive phrases consist of an infinitive (to + base form of the verb) and any associated modifiers

To raise funds             To win the elections

Clauses fit into two main categories: independent and dependent. 
An independent clause may stand alone as a complete sentence because it contains a subject and a verb and forms a complete idea.  A sentence made of one independent clause is called a “simple sentence.”  A sentence made of two or more independent clauses is called a “compound sentence.”  Note that these distinctions rely on the particular combination of subject (underlined) and verb (double-underlined) rather than the length of the sentence.

[Uncle Jay’s two Siamese kittens kept me awake all night long with their constant mewing and wrestling.]

[I sing,] and [she dances.]

• A dependent clause contains a subject and a verb but does not form a complete idea.

[When Laney scratched off the final number on the lottery ticket]

Do you feel the suspense?  A dependent clause needs an independent clause to finish the thought and become a complete sentence.  This type of sentence is called a “complex sentence.”  A sentence with at least one dependent clause and at least two independent clauses is called a “compound-complex sentence.”

[When Laney scratched off the final number on the lottery ticket,] she remembered the reason for her nickname, Luckless Laney.

The movie [that I saw last weekend] wasn’t nearly as good as the popcorn.

Mr. Wu will not visit tomorrow [unless he can get his car repaired this afternoon].